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Jeff does a great job in forcing his characters to endure the coals as he forges them into the eventual heroes they will need to become whether they want to or not

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However he also doesnt inundate the audience with an unending slew of made up words and terminology that leaves you so befuddled you cant continue

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Being a voracious reader it is hard to find new booksseries that arent just the same old rehash

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If the hero doesnt overcome then they arent much of a hero regardless of what situation they might survive see hunger games if you want to know what i mean katniss just pisses me off as a whiny little snot

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Jeff wilson has bravely taken time to develop his hero into a three dimensional character who is capable yet flawed

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The opening is very jarring and the subsequent opening chapters are very slow moving

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The author spends too much time setting up the background before any real plot development happens

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Keep pushing past the opening and the story will take you a rollercoaster knowing that things will work out but still unsure how to see the next piece of the puzzle