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short, golden, special and found.
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The premise was interesting as were the characters, but this was an extremely short story and at times it was a little disjointed - probably because the story isn't as fully developed as it should be
Doing that would fix many of the issues mentioned above - especially if he employs a professional editor when he's finished
If you only have time to read a very short story, you might enjoy this one